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    Re: New Design

    It's kinda strange. The background doesn't seem to fit in with the man and the city and vice versa.

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    Re: New Design

    I think it would look better if the centre of the background where the lines met was at the bottom of the city so then the grey lines were just going out towards the sky and not in every direction


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    Re: New Design

    Quote Originally Posted by Simon
    I think it would look better if the centre of the background where the lines met was at the bottom of the city so then the grey lines were just going out towards the sky and not in every direction
    Exactly what I was going to say. :]

    Also, you could maybe enlarge the city a bit or reduce the canvas size on the top, there feels like a bit too much free space.

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    Re: New Design

    Good to see something done so professionally. Clean lines, looks really nice.
    Make some more interesting stuff though, this looked a little plain and the gray thing in the middle was really just a big space filler yeah? Couldn't think of anything to put I guess. I get that a lot too.
    Also, Australia cityscape, good choice.

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    Re: New Design

    Perfect job on the Opera House sillouette. The city was too small I agree. The man was good, I liked the hair.

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    Re: New Design

    Don't bump threads please.


 

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