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    My Sketchs - Bored Teenage Girl

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    Re: Awstun's Sketch Book

    I forgot you could draw like this Awstun. Nice work.

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    Re: Awstun's Sketch Book

    I liked the top one, the whole thing was really well proportioned, even though the head was a fucking smiley face.
    Damn, I should really put some of my...ahem..."art", up, you inspired me, well done.

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    Re: My Sketchs - Bored Teenage Girl

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    Re: My Sketchs - Bored Teenage Girl

    May i ask what happened to her left hand, it looks like a squid (her hand).
    OK stuff i guess, not the best, but ok just for a doodler like you, lol. keep it up, just some improvement on proportions should do you good.

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    Re: My Sketchs - Bored Teenage Girl

    Its really out of proportion, her legs are shorter then the size of her body, also you should curve the back alittle its too rigid and looks more like shes had a pole shoved up her arse. also the hands and feets are larger when they're further away, also try and make them smaller then the ones closest to you. Also i really recommend that you draw whatever she is sitting on as it looks like she's floating in mid air which doesn't really help the drawing.

    There's quite alot of other things i could of said but i held back, anyway sorry if i seem mean i've always been quite a heavy art critic.


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    Re: My Sketchs - Bored Teenage Girl

    Simon forgot to mention that the head is too big, and the elbow should be lower. Some shape to the torso? Curves? Breasts? Hips? Also, fabric does not act like that. Do a drapery study, and please study basic proportional guidelines.

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    Re: My Sketchs - Bored Teenage Girl

    Pretty heavy criticism, but I guess it will help next time I draw.
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    Re: My Sketchs - Bored Teenage Girl

    Not bad ,I like the lol blaster.. Looks alright

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    Re: My Sketchs - Bored Teenage Girl

    I like the first two.
    You have nice drawing skills.

    I don't really draw so I can't criticize.

    Nice work...keep it up.
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