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    Veteran Enthusiast Yadda's Avatar


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    Manbird thing?!

    Look at the most recent posts for more artwork.

    Sketchbook (practise)
    http://**********.com/img/1238634647.jpg - Assorted shit
    http://**********.com/img/1238634657.jpg - Feet
    http://**********.com/img/1238634670.jpg - Nose mouth eye
    http://**********.com/img/1238634725.jpg - Shape and proportion of face (overkill)

    Heavyweight (attempts at final products)
    http://**********.com/img/1238634759.jpg - Contour of left hand
    http://**********.com/img/1238634783.jpg - Blocky face
    http://**********.com/img/1238634806.jpg - Smooth face

    -All credit to Wesley Burt for character idea-
    http://**********.com/img/1238634823.jpg - Birdman gestures
    http://**********.com/img/1238634856.jpg - Test sketch
    http://**********.com/img/1238634873.jpg - Layout for final product

    Notebook (basically random shit)
    http://**********.com/img/1238634889.jpg - Teacher said contour, I said "k"
    http://**********.com/img/1238634942.jpg - Holy shit it's a soffish
    http://**********.com/img/1238635741.jpg - Form and t-t

    Tell me what to improve on, I hate proportion.


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    Re: Pretty rusty

    I can't see much to improve on, its all really awesome.

    I lol'd at some of the picture side notes and the comic.

    [center:akkfv4h7][/center:akkfv4h7]

    [center:akkfv4h7]"Fuck off bitch, I've got legos to construct."[/center:akkfv4h7]

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    Re: Pretty rusty

    You are good with body stuff.
    You should try making backgrounds.
    [center:24pu3o4q][/center:24pu3o4q]
    [center:24pu3o4q]Free Stuff!
    I shit you not...[/center:24pu3o4q]

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    Re: Pretty rusty

    When shading round forms, leave a lighter bit at the sides at all times, this helps to suggest that they are soft or lost edges, as round forms almost always are.
    [center:3mdlh4lx]Fuck you. Cunt.[/center:3mdlh4lx]

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    Re: Pretty rusty

    Thanks, I always hate that flat feeling that my drawings have, it's shading that I don't put enough effort into. Anyway, I'll try and update every now and then.


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    Re: Pretty rusty

    Work on faces. Other than that your shading on the very last drawing isnt that bad and most of your birdman stuff is impressive. And the feet are alright.
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1255480693.jpg[/img]
    my thread

    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2& ... 8#p1189878

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    Re: Pretty rusty

    Quote Originally Posted by Yadda
    http://**********.com/img/1238634647.jpg - Assorted shit
    Lol, you put c: and o_o.

    Anyways, the hand was very good, it had the right shading, details and very smooth curving lines.

    The lip was okay, but the shading on the lip itself could be done with more of a gloss.


    Quote Originally Posted by Yadda
    http://**********.com/img/1238634725.jpg - Shape and proportion of face (overkill)
    Ew, the head is all distorted and stuff. Also, in perspective, one eye wouldn't be so high above the other. The upper-right corner of the man's head's shading is demented.
    It was okay, I guess. :/

    Quote Originally Posted by Yadda
    http://**********.com/img/1238634823.jpg - Birdman gestures
    Insane, most of them. Rough sketches aside, it looked quite good. The proportions and all are pretty good, and the wings are not too big or small.


    Overall, doesn't look too shabby. You still need to work a bit on shading and smoothening it out though.

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    Re: Pretty rusty

    i lol'd at the 2 last ones.
    [center:3mz8yq62][/center:3mz8yq62]

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    Re: Pretty rusty

    Pretty good , try making some characters up and do stuff,
    Your shading and that is pretty good, just needs a bit of work on the light direction and texture

    stop using lined paper >:/
    Use plain A3/4

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    Re: Pretty rusty

    Lol I meant 'random shit' as in, I'm not really serious about it.
    But thanks for the good criticism. I'll get some new shit in a few.



 
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