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    my comic

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    MY TREADIMY STICKSIBAHAS TUT
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    Re: my comic

    Brush up on your drawing skills, please.
    [center:3mdlh4lx]Fuck you. Cunt.[/center:3mdlh4lx]

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    Re: my comic

    1. When your characters look like sentient cocks then it's time to touch up on some drawing skills.
    2. When you're using Microsoft Paint, it shows that you're not really trying.
    3. You confused the layout of the word balloons
    4. Not funny, at all
    5. When did this forum become a haven for 5-year-olds all of the sudden?


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    Re: my comic

    Go read some tutes on being funny, you too, matt//.

    Get photoshop or some free program located here and try draw on a piece of paper before you try anything on the computer. First-hand is better learning then second-hand.

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    Re: my comic

    Some people can cover up bad art with good dialogue but unfortunately you are not one of them. Keep practicing and you will improve.

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    Re: my comic

    funny, and humourous, but the drawings could be better.
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    Re: my comic

    It's not good. Spend more time drawing it and/or get a better program. Make similar objects look the same (like eyes and the talk boxes). Also, make the comic interesting.
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    Re: my comic

    im going to be honest its neither funny nor artistic however try to brush up your skills and come back when you've got something decent and il give it some cc

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    Re: my comic

    ^^ Just listen to all them, whether or not it's good/bad.

    Go on that Google machine and search for some tutorials. It'll be very useful.

    Also, you should work on your page layout/design. It's horrid.
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