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    Fanatic Enthusiast Trendy's Avatar

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    Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    ok, here is the mans weapon. it has two forms, he can set it to each one. the first form is a sword whos power is controled by the mans aura. name it? the second one is sort of a aura gun type thing that covers his entire arm.this was made on the new program i just got, manga studio.
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1247696445.bmp[/img]




    Ok, sso im making a manga series. here is the story line;
    here is the outline storyline:

    A Teenager name Kiwi(Main char, nice body, redheaded, fun to be around) is just hanging out when she notices a strange journal on her desk. she picks it up, and it has "Dream" written on the front. so she starts writing in it like a diary.. but the first thing she writes about is a dream she has. soon after, the same thing she wrote happens in real time, and then she becomes curious. so she begins to experiment with it..etc.
    STORYLINE UPDATE!: ok, so obviously if the whole manga revolved around 1 girl, it would be pretty boring. and also so i dont look like a complete rip off of death note. lol. anyway, i added two characters, whos sketches will be shown soon, maybe tonight anyway, not sure of their name yet, maybe you guys could help decide? there is another girl and one boy. the new storyline is more like this: an average day for a teenager would be to train and involve lots of weapons. the boy, he uses kind of this barrel-like sword that uses its aura to slice things. im going to make a sketch of that soon. the girl is more of a flexible, speedy person. so anyway, the three characters get attacked by a strange person, who hides his identity with rough clothing and such. after knocking out the three, he leaves a strange mark on there neck. the three find out its a marking of different elements, and go to the element shrine, or something or other. there they meat each other thats all im telling you right now. dont wanna spoil the whole thing anyway, i will post the sketches of kiwi and other two people, so you guys can help to name them and such >_>

    thats what i have so far. i have a sketch of kiwi too. im going to start on the firt manga chapter tomorow.

    i will post teasers and crap here. i probably will only post the first few chapters, and then some artwork for it... but i plan on selling the manga.

    if anyone knows anything about making manga into anime, pm me please.


    (PostScript; This is in the art section, because i am going to post teasers, posters and crap about the manga in here in the future. DONT LOCK D btw for all you grammerfuckedupassholes out there, Postscript is P.S.)

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    Kiwi(FINAL):
    http://**********.com/img/1247522787.jpg

    Man(UnNamed, SKETCH):
    http://**********.com/img/1247522787.jpg

    Girl(UnNamed,SKETCH):
    http://**********.com/img/1247522888.jpg
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    Re: Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    Lol^^^
    I SHALL NEVERZ WORK FASTUR O_O


    jk. ill try to get through the first chapter by wed next week.
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    Re: Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    Meh, something fresh IMO and I'd like to see how you pull it out.

    Although I'm curious where did the "Beach" came from.
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    Re: Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    im not sure, i just wanted to add something to the title to make it more interesting. i was deciding between kiwi beach or kiwi's fruit bowl, but i liked the shorter name
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    Re: Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    It's a good idea but for some reason your avatar and signature really irritate me. I'm not saying it's bad or anything, because it's better than what I could draw in terms of people, but I just hate it. D:

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    Re: Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    Hay guyys, major storyline update i think you like it. i wi,ll post sketches either tonight or tmm.
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    Re: Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    post the drawings foo D:
    i'm not gonna read that until u do .. looks too boring
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    Re: Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    Ok, the sketches are posted.
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    Re: Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    hmm. look at the word sketches, showng they are not the final designs. actually, those are my first sketches of them Lol.
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    Re: Kiwi Beach, manga Coming Soon

    Quote Originally Posted by Rem
    Even for a sketch, it's fairly poor. I'm not saying you don't have potential. I just feel that you may not have the skill required to draw a manga that people would actually enjoy reading.
    harsh but true

    Try to improve your skills and then think about making the manga.. the story looks pretty promising.


 
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