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    Run Test (first flash)

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    First Flash I've made, excluding the few shit animations I made like two years. There's a noticeable difference of the size of the figure throughout the animation which should go away once I'm more experienced with flash. Constructive criticism is appreciated.

    Animated with a mouse with a fps of 12.

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    Re: Run Test (first flash)

    I don't know much about Flash, so I can't really give any cc, but it looks cool. I love the style of the guy. Nice job.

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    Re: Run Test (first flash)

    That's pretty darn good for a first. The arms are wrong though.
    [center:1hzoraxf][/center:1hzoraxf]

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    Re: Run Test (first flash)

    Quote Originally Posted by Lawn Feed
    That's pretty darn good for a first. The arms are wrong though.
    what do you mean by wrong?

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    Re: Run Test (first flash)

    they move in an unrealistic way and are badly positioned.
    [center:1hzoraxf][/center:1hzoraxf]


 

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