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    P2k
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    Something i've been working on..

    http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1211248435
    http://antiup.net/view/882/

    Yea. I just need some feedback. I just want to know if the time i put into it was a waste or not. I want to make it kind of big, but not if it sucks. I can't really rate my own stuff that well.

    It's inspired by Adam Phillips, if you can't notice.
    And the menu thing was done really quickly, i'll make it much better later.
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    Re: Something i've been working on..

    For some reason my computer blocks swfcabin, could you host it at antiup or something for me? Please?
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    Re: Something i've been working on..

    try using a dif hoster alot of comps block it
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    Re: Something i've been working on..

    hmm. kthen.

    Antiup:

    http://antiup.net/view/882/
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    Re: Something i've been working on..

    That is brilliant, all the art if fantastic and the animation of the water etc is flawless.
    One thing I noticed was that the monster-thing grabbing the water didn't seem to fit with the scene well, it would've been better if the scene around it was either darker, or the character less mysterious. Other than that, everything is brilliant.
    Please continue it.

    Oh by the way, how come you are never on MSN? I added you a while back with your permission, and you're never on.

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    Re: Something i've been working on..

    lol. I'm always on.
    I just thought you didn't want to talk to me. <.<
    I use my real name on msn, not p2k.

    And thanks for the comment ;;D

    edit:i made the menu a little better, and retouched the last scene a bit. I'll work on it more tomorrow.

    http://antiup.net/view/904
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    Re: Something i've been working on..

    host it again somewhere else D:
    school blocks it and Im grounded at home :c
    Ohay.

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    Re: Something i've been working on..

    Nice work.
    It has that very distinguishable style to it - that anime style where frames are missed out to give a choppy-ish feel to it. So if that's what you were going for - good job.
    The art's also great.

    Continuepls.

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    Re: Something i've been working on..

    It should be more longer.
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    Dev is muh bro!

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    Re: Something i've been working on..

    Awesome. It's very good. Definitely worth continuing.
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