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    Fanatic Enthusiast Alcyone's Avatar

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    Re: first

    It did not have a lot of actually animation, also if hes falling he should fall directly down not go from side to side like that. Keep trying though.

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    Re: first

    yeah, thanks for the comment. And, i'll take those words to consideration.
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    Re: first

    You call that an animation? >_>

    For a start, he stops in mid-air to say "shit." Second, like Xinq said, there was not much animation. When he fell on the rock, rather than blood trickle down the rock, there should have been some splattering.

    But for a first at least you know how to use sounds properly, and effects.

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    Re: first

    Lol, thanks Skype, for the comment.

    Actually, i've been using flash for about 2months, but never animated with it, so i know my way round
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    Re: first

    I downloaded flash, but it didnt work correctly on Vista, I couldnt save.
    But I'll give tips though.
    You blurred right, but he fell down too fast, and he stopped in mid-air saying ''shit'' and then suddenly moved to the right? >_>

    I liked the idea, but it just wasnt right. It was a bit entertaining I must admit :3, so...
    Keep it up! =D
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