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  1. #1
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    I need critisism and help

    SO FAR I'VE BEEN DOING FLASH FOR ABOUT A 8 days
    Fire Punch


    Fire Test:
    http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/q...vot/flamed.gif
    (this was originally made for me to add as an emote for msn but it wouldn't work...)


    Water Test:
    http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/q...ivot/water.gif

    Punch Fail:
    http://i455.photobucket.com/albums/q...ivot/punch.gif
    (it fails cuz of choppyness)

    Flash Vs Pivot:
    http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/p...editedapwc.gif
    (my first ever flash)

    default bashing, edited:
    http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/p...editedwomy.gif

    Toast!: (i made this cus i was bored not to much effort was in this)
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pxry_...e=channel_page

    as you can all see right now, i am yet but a noob. Please post your criticism, and tell me how something should of looked.
    also if anybody is willing, please attach one of your quick animation's as a flash file, such as particles, stretching, or just the simple stuff that i got wrong so i can study.
    thanks
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    Re: I need critisism and help

    First off, im only going to look at your newest one because if i critisized the older ones id be a n00b.
    Its k...i do pencil which is exactly like flash
    Its hard to redraw every frame so good job
    Its a bit to slow though...Increase the speed and its kool.
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    Re: I need critisism and help

    Quote Originally Posted by Chainblade
    First off, im only going to look at your newest one because if i critisized the older ones id be a n00b.
    Its k...i do pencil which is exactly like flash
    Its hard to redraw every frame so good job
    Its a bit to slow though...Increase the speed and its kool.
    Cortesy? (In my sig)
    No, its not fucking like flash. I've tried both and they're VASTLY different. E.g. Flash is way harder. Shut up.

    That's not to bad for 8 days, try smoothing out your stickfigures, instead of a ton of tiny lines, try a few continuous lines. Not bad again, though.

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    Re: I need critisism and help

    for a fresh starter, I really like that you're getting in touch with the elements!
    ex: water/fire etc :P

    the more you understand elements like fire, water, rubble/rock/earth, lightning, the more exciting you are to use them XD!!!

    keep it up man you'll be at the top in no time. I can confidently guarantee it.
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    Re: I need critisism and help

    lolwat gouk? Anyways gouk is right. You have alot of potential. :P
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    my thread

    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2& ... 8#p1189878

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    Re: I need critisism and help

    I liked the fire, but the movements weren't to good. You need to, just like in Pivot, ease. Like you move a tiny bit, then a bit more, the a bit more, and then a large movement, and so on. It makes it looks more flowing. And make sure to use onion skin, it helps a lot.
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    ermm the fire won was pretty cool, just keep werking on it 'nd You'll be awesome
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