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    Unfinished animation

    Well, I'm starting a long animation that could be my inter test...

    If i can make it well enough.

    Anyways, Here's the first part, so far.



    Please tell me what you think, and how I can improve, I would really appreciate it!
    I want this animation to be great, lol.
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    >> S##t m_ Rebooting. Hello, Samuel.

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    I like it so far;
    Looks interesting.

    You should definalty finish it.
    I got lost the first time though. :|
    Maybe add more detail and some words?
    But yeah overall, awesome.
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    Added in some quick background changes, and I think it looks a tad better.
    I'm working on the Question mark, lol. There's one in there, but it's tiny.


    Tell me what I should do, peoples!!!
    Eh....i made the first pause longer on the .piv...but for some reason, the gif shortened it...

    Workin on it!
    SA$_/AI%20has log[d in.
    > S&ys|BT
    > P_s word?
    > OMEGA
    >> A^e_%20_u su!e? (Y/N)
    > Y
    >> S##t m_ Rebooting. Hello, Samuel.

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    Quote Originally Posted by xenomorph911
    Added in some quick background changes, and I think it looks a tad better.
    I'm working on the Question mark, lol. There's one in there, but it's tiny.


    Tell me what I should do, peoples!!!
    Eh....i made the first pause longer on the .piv...but for some reason, the gif shortened it...

    Workin on it!
    You should make oneEditLike a separet stick) of his arms behind the gun, IF you want, I don't really know, it just would look better, or at least intill I see it..you do't haev to tho

    Looking good tho =D

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    Okey dokey, fixed the pause, and the question marks.

    SA$_/AI%20has log[d in.
    > S&ys|BT
    > P_s word?
    > OMEGA
    >> A^e_%20_u su!e? (Y/N)
    > Y
    >> S##t m_ Rebooting. Hello, Samuel.


 

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