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    DB Kill



    Credit to Stickid and Bert.
    Quote Originally Posted by Leonardo Da Vinci
    "Our life is made by the deaths of others."

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    Re: DB Kill

    Hey nice .stk where'd ya get it? Haha just kidding.

    It's nice dude. Colors are a bit messed up though. And also the frame spacing is too heavy.

    I suggest you add more frames during and between moves then ease them out.

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    haha thanks Stickid.
    Quote Originally Posted by Leonardo Da Vinci
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    Re: DB Kill

    That fall looked weird as fuck. Lol.

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    Well no duh it looked weird, he got chopped into two pieces. LOL
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    Re: DB Kill

    ^^ Oh my bad, lmao. Nice animating though, maybe some easing at the end would make it better.

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    Re: DB Kill

    Animation:6/10-Smooth most of the times and stiff at times. Spacing too heavy.

    Enjoyment:5/10-Not really an enjoying animation but it is a short so for a short it's 7/10

    Graphics:5/10-You used colors but DB's blur color's weird.

    Tips: Less spacing(for animation), more upper body movement on that one part (for animation), show the other half of the chopped up stickman(for graphics) and put blood in (For graphics, animation and possibly enjoyment).



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    Re: DB Kill

    Thanks for the really good comment but your not supposed to cc. Although I do like the time put into that post, thank you.
    Quote Originally Posted by Leonardo Da Vinci
    "Our life is made by the deaths of others."

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    Re: DB Kill

    Quote Originally Posted by Down-With-Life
    Thanks for the really good comment but your not supposed to cc. Although I do like the time put into that post, thank you.
    Oops, I gotta remember that.
    But ya that anim's pretty decent.



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