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  1. #1
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    Run, Jump, and Shotgun

    i don't have a lot of animations to show, so i'll just post this here

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    Comments, ideas, anything. Please.

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    Senior Member RAGE's Avatar
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    Re: Run, Jump, and Shotgun

    Hey thats real good
    The effect could've been more pizazz but eh.
    try a shotgun, but doublesized
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    MY THREAD ON THE WEST SIDE. YO.

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    THEY'RE CALLED SHROOMS.

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    Re: Run, Jump, and Shotgun

    it jumps to fast on the shot... but nice either way


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    Re: Run, Jump, and Shotgun

    Pretty nice, simple and fun. I'll tell you what to do to improve it.

    1. Make the shotgun smaller or use a different shotgun, this one looks like a rifle.
    2. Make him shoot sooner, right as he lands. Should be as simple as deleting a few frames.
    3. When he jumps back, he's leaning forward, make him flow with the move instead, catching up to his legs.

    Those things alone would make this a better animation.


 

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