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    Sorry Crono- Updated some more.


    despite Crono's caps lock hollering at me, I couldn't resist using the base again. another one of my prep series.

    changed it tadd, what else needs fixing?

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    Re: Sorry Crono -_-

    Quote Originally Posted by Acer

    despite Crono's caps lock hollering at me, I couldn't resist using the base again. another one of my prep series.
    Where's the blood D:
    And you should of flashed it black whilst he does that effect slash, instead of white. But still cool I guess.

    And it's alright :c, don't take any notice of that nasty old crono.

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    Re: Sorry Crono -_-

    That was pretty good, but the base's arms suddenly stopped moving after he killed the other.
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    Re: Sorry Crono -_-

    It really isn't that good, both sticks are extremely stiff and the movements are pretty bad.

    Work on it.
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    Re: Sorry Crono -_-

    The actual slash was pretty unclear. I'm not even sure what happened.
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    Re: Sorry Crono -_-

    Yeah I see what you mean, I might need to avoid the white out and just show whats happening so that theres no confusion.
    this was what I said to some one on another site: You know how there's some of them shows where each person launches at one another in anime, they show either a slow-mow of there silhouettes overlapping or a black or in my case a white screen with a quick slash. and then quickly back to a real time of the two apart and then one falls. I'll edit it though.

    but I see your point, i'll see if I can edit it later.
    EDIT: I tried, but idk, what do you think


    yeah so this is my AOTW entry I'm working on.



    still in progress of editing and adding to it. I'm liking it so far.

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    Re: Sorry Crono -_-(some more stuff)

    The movements on the guy slashing look pretty cool, but the trails are bad, mostly at the end. It doesn't flow well with the sword, so it looks more like a hooked part on the sword there than trails.
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    Re: Sorry Crono -_-(some more stuff)

    Well, you could have made him running into him, then when he gets there the screen flashes and he appears like that pose in the end, while the other one appears headless in the ground.

    But to that version, you could have made his fall less stiff.
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    Re: Sorry Crono -_-(some more stuff)

    okay right now I see that shakiness near the end, but I fixed the things you guys pointed out. took the trails out of the three frames and adjusted the feet.


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