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    Enthusiast Crest's Avatar

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    Stagger Punch, thingy.

    Errgghh, trying a different movement, but it didn't come out well, so I decided to freestyle it.
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    Still blank lol

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    Re: Stagger Punch, thingy.

    Not enough power, delete a frame or two. Also, his back foot moves, stops in one frame and then moves again. The head is a bit shaky too.

    But the poses were hot. Keep it up Cresty-poo.

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    Re: Stagger Punch, thingy.

    Keep an eye out on the foot movement... Needs a bit of work... A nice anim tho... Try give the punch a bit more force

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    Re: Stagger Punch, thingy.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lolzafish
    Not enough power, delete a frame or two. Also, his back foot moves, stops in one frame and then moves again. The head is a bit shaky too.

    But the poses were hot. Keep it up Cresty-poo.
    It was fast enough. The only thing that made it weak is the easing of the arm at the end.

    Nice anim dude :]

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    Re: Stagger Punch, thingy.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lolzafish
    Not enough power, delete a frame or two. Also, his back foot moves, stops in one frame and then moves again. The head is a bit shaky too.

    But the poses were hot. Keep it up Cresty-poo.
    No. The hit had just the correct amount of power considering the time used to build power, he wasn't charging a massive blow.

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    Re: Stagger Punch, thingy.

    Thanks so much for the comments guys, c:
    Still blank lol

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    Re: Stagger Punch, thingy.

    Quote Originally Posted by Curse
    Quote Originally Posted by Lolzafish
    Not enough power, delete a frame or two. Also, his back foot moves, stops in one frame and then moves again. The head is a bit shaky too.

    But the poses were hot. Keep it up Cresty-poo.
    No. The hit had just the correct amount of power considering the time used to build power, he wasn't charging a massive blow.
    I agree with PivAd123 on this one, if the animation was continued and he made the last frame take the arm back in a bit more instead of keeping it extended, then it would look fine.

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    Re: Stagger Punch, thingy.

    That was actually pretty awesome for a short. Though instead of easing it whilst extended, I'd make it bend downwards to make it more realistic.
    Anyway cool job


 

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