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    Gym - Animation

    just a test.

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    Re: Gym - Animation

    It missed some essential poses.
    right now it looks like his legs are going besides the obstacle, while they SHOULD have gone over.
    The frame that is missing, should contain a pose which shows him stretching him legs over the obstacle.

    The jump was fine, same were the other movements.
    Just edit it one minute and you are fine
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    Re: Gym - Animation

    I thought that was awesome. Cavolia's advice is good though.

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    Re: Gym - Animation

    *E:
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    Edited the Animation. Thanks Holy. <3
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    Re: Gym - Animation

    Much better
    The only thing you could improve now, is the shakyness of the arms when he jumps over.
    In the first anim there wasn't, but because you had a wrong placements of the arms in the new frames there is now.

    I love to see you did something with the advise, great!
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