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    Shortfall

    Shortfall

    A little combo I made.

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    Re: Combo

    now that, is what you call shaky, and bad foot placement.
    you need to improve on this.


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    Re: Combo

    The starting was pretty good, but the ending made my eyes bleed
    The foot placement is very bad, and the fast-kick was stiff.
    Work more on basics, you'll be fine.

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    Re: Combo

    Hey Dungiful, next time, try giving some CC instead of just telling him how bad it is. It wasn't that bad, the beginning was alright, the whole thing was too quick. The end wasn't good, the leg is on the right on one frame, all the way across the other side on the next. Try transitioning, with 2-3 frames, show the leg coming across from the kick before the last, to that last kick, and move the whole body with it.

    Try again
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    Re: Combo

    The foot placement was alright,hes jumping thats why it looks like that.

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    Re: Combo

    New Animation

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    Re: Shortfall

    :/ you´re good animating, but one thing i see, is that you move one joint, and you leave the other(s) without movement, try to move all joints in your animations :3

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    Re: Shortfall

    I do move all joints


 

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