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  1. #1
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    My first "real" Animation

    ]OK i wanted to post this for fun. yeah C+C (comment and critique)
    [spoiler:ys9qfnpl][attachment=0:ys9qfnpl]Sword Fight.gif[/attachment:ys9qfnpl][/spoiler:ys9qfnpl]
    The movement's choppy and it's not very fluent in my mind. But I guess I'll improve...hopefully

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    Senior Member Alca's Avatar
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    Re: My first "real" Animation

    Ok.. What can i saw without being too harsh.

    Choppy, poor movements, un-creative, sort of lazy. bad physics, no easing. Legs extremely stiff. Not even any particles. the blood is just a splodge, extremely unrealistic. Etc...


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    Re: My first "real" Animation

    Yeah I'm having trouble with pivot. I should rephrase the title ha not good at this kinda stuff.

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    Re: My first "real" Animation

    Quote Originally Posted by Alca
    Ok.. What can i saw without being too harsh.

    Choppy, poor movements, un-creative, sort of lazy. bad physics, no easing. Legs extremely stiff. Not even any particles. the blood is just a splodge, extremely unrealistic. Etc...
    same .-.
    why don't see Darren's Tutorial, it'll be helpful

    here it is:
    viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662


 

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