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    2 Run Loop

    hey guys, how it looks, and which of those is better?

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    I liked more this

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    Re: 2 Run Loop

    #1 seems to be the better of the two that you uploaded. It just seems more natural if you take a look at it from a perspective because everything seems to flow together whereas the second animation reminds of the heavy spacing style that people used to use.
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    Re: 2 Run Loop

    actually you're right,
    those arms (first anim) need improve, looks strange for me, this is why I liked more the second, I flow better the arm, I think :x
    I will work in those arms and see the result.
    Thanks man for comment

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    Re: 2 Run Loop

    The back leg needs to be brought up more, and the front leg needs to be fully extended when it hits the floor, because at the moment, it looks like hes roller-skating.

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    Re: 2 Run Loop

    humm... I'll try improve that parts magiC, thanks for point those flaws

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    Re: 2 Run Loop

    I like the second one more, though it seems like the back and the head come to a sudden stop when they are at the down most position, also a bit bigger spaces for the legs would be good in the easing frames=Bigger movement at the turning point of the legs.
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    Re: 2 Run Loop

    I've never been good at making runs, so I dont got the hang with the flow and easyng yet, but I'm taking your advices and trying to improve it.

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    Re: 2 Run Loop

    i think number one looks better4 but they both look similar

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    Re: 2 Run Loop

    The arms need to go out more, that way it looks like he is trying to run faster, just bring the back arm up and maybe a little bit over or under the upper arm being vertical.
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    Re: 2 Run Loop

    thank you Camel for give some advices,
    these comments was unexpected, because the last post was in Wed Apr 27 and the bump Sun May 08.
    anyway thanks for comment

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