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    o ne m ore

    a run


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    Your best animation. But at the and you should bend right leg other way.

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    that was actually really cool! The main thing that needs fixing is the run into the kick, poses were a bit off, also the lack acceleration from the run to the kick. It went straight into the 3d spin kick, so ease it a little more. The spacing of the 3d kick was pretty much spot on, although I think at the end the poses get a bit iffy.

    At the end of the kick, his leg probably goes a bit too high, almost forming a 45 degree angle with his back. The spacing of the back at the end was a little inconsistent but still your best animation yet. In all I thought it was animated well and had some nice entertainment value, keep it up!

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    ohh ok thanx for the help

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    Re: o ne m ore

    one more freestyled anim

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    Re: o ne m ore

    pretty good the back should bend forward at the end though.

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