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  1. #1
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    pop pop pop watchin motherfuckers drop


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    Couldn't sleep so I spent the whole night animating this pile of junk. First time seriously trying to do blood, so it looks kinda shitty. Got really tired of animating this so I rushed the dude with the gun at the end.

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    Re: pop pop pop watchin motherfuckers drop

    I feel like the recoil from the gunshot should've been bigger, unless he was firing a weapon with a very very small calibre ( which doesn't apply here; it looks like a Colt 1911 ).
    The muzzle flash stood too long on the screen. Generally, muzzle flashes only appear for 1 frame and then fade out, or there simply is no muzzle flash and there's smoke coming out.
    The reaction to being shot was perfect and so was the blood, loved that.

    Sorry if I looked like a cock, I was only trying to give you small tips. I don't usually criticise higher ranks.

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    Re: pop pop pop watchin motherfuckers drop

    Quote Originally Posted by Sm0k33w33d420
    I feel like the recoil from the gunshot should've been bigger, unless he was firing a weapon with a very very small calibre ( which doesn't apply here; it looks like a Colt 1911 ).
    The muzzle flash stood too long on the screen. Generally, muzzle flashes only appear for 1 frame and then fade out, or there simply is no muzzle flash and there's smoke coming out.
    The reaction to being shot was perfect and so was the blood, loved that.

    Sorry if I looked like a cock, I was only trying to give you small tips. I don't usually criticise higher ranks.
    Pretty much this except I don't think his arms should have raised up after he was shot in the head, they should have fallen limp, the way you did it seemed like he was slowly raising his arms despite the fact there is a hole in his brain (whether or not you meant to animate it like that, thats how I saw it).

    Otherwise I thought the reaction and the blood looked nice, following what memphis pointed out it woulda been perfect, entertaining none the less!

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    Re: pop pop pop watchin motherfuckers drop

    I don't think the blood was that bad, just a little short and few. Other than that pretty good
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    Re: pop pop pop watchin motherfuckers drop

    if you added some more frames of blood, it would've been fucking great

    Really good work man!
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    Re: pop pop pop watchin motherfuckers drop



    T'was nice.
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