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Thread: Demon Style

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    Neo
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    Demon Style

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    Re: Demon Style

    Looks clean but the spacing is a bit inconsistent after the hand stand thing. Also maybe you should extend the handstand movement a bit, like when he is at the highest point to show a bit of balance and to flesh out the movement. It sort of went up and straight down and was a tad abrupt in my opinion. Otherwise looks nice.

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    Re: Demon Style

    Quote Originally Posted by Rez
    Looks clean but the spacing is a bit inconsistent after the hand stand thing. Also maybe you should extend the handstand movement a bit, like when he is at the highest point to show a bit of balance and to flesh out the movement. It sort of went up and straight down and was a tad abrupt in my opinion. Otherwise looks nice.
    Thanks for the feedback, and I'll try to work on these things next time.

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    Re: Demon Style

    It's good, but I've seen better from you. high beginner.

    Also, why have you made a poll for ranks if it is posted in the freestyle section? You could have posted it in beginners chat.

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    Re: Demon Style

    Its always cool to see other people using my base. For the most part I enjoyed that. Although the one thing that bugs me the most is what Rez pointed out. He came down from the handstand quite abruptly. Maybe adding another 2 or 3 frames of him in the actual hand stand position before bringing him back down would help make that look a lot better.

    One other thing you might want to note, is that he only did the handstand with 1 hand. Which realistically speaking is very hard to do, so that said, whoever watches that part is probably going to feel like it's a bit awkward to them. I'm not saying you have to be realistic all the time, but for the purpose of this animation it might of made it look a tad better.

    Anyways, I can tell you were being a little lazy with this animation (probably having some fun) because I've seen better from you and thats fine trust me. It's good to have some fun because eventually you'll get sick of it. Either way I still enjoyed it, so good job and thanks for using my base.

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    Re: Demon Style

    Quote Originally Posted by Raymond
    so good job and thanks for using my base.
    You're welcome

    And thanks for the criticism, I appreciate it.

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