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    Short Loop


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    Re: Short Loop

    that was pretty nice, but the double framing really hurt the quality.

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    Re: Short Loop

    Went way too fast in my opinion. But good still.

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    Re: Short Loop

    That looks pretty cool but fuck that looks so wrong.
    The physics and how far into the wall he goes seems way off to me

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    Re: Short Loop

    The fact that it loops and its 3D is pretty cool man, I also really love that stick (link the .stk please?). The movement was too fast though and the tremor on the obstacle looked out of place to me but overall it was refreshing and nice. I liked how he had an arc to his run up. You should probably ease the end of the loop a bit more so it flows nicer.

    Quote Originally Posted by Neo
    that was pretty nice, but the double framing really hurt the quality.
    I didn't see any double framing? :/

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    Re: Short Loop

    I think it's pretty cool. You should get rid of the screen shake though. It makes it seem as though he's kicking the wall, when in fact he's just jumping off of it.

    The 3D is a really good attempt. The animation might need to be a bit more smoothed out, but it seems great overall.


 

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