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    Orange Fight 101 (unfinished)

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    I'm not really sure if I'll finish it or not, it will be hand to hand after this point if I do however, oh and credit to the cloud stick that i used in the gunsmoke, i don't know the name but it can be found on droidz

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    Re: Orange Fight 101 (unfinished)

    that old school flow. I love it.

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    Re: Orange Fight 101 (unfinished)

    I love the advanced perspectives, it's what more beginners should be trying.

    The spacing and flow of the animation could definitely be worked on, it got shaky and a bit stiff at some points so revising the way you have spaced the animation and editing would help. The victims them selves could have used some movement, they were essentially static dummies until they got hit, all their poses were the exact same also (at least for the most part) which is pretty lazy.

    I absolutely adore the blood though the way you showed big blobs coming out and changing shape due to gravity as well as showing particles, in my opinion it was much better than how most high ranked animators do it with simple lines of particles. As I mentioned earlier the perspective changes were ace, and entertainment value of the animation was just awesome. I also like how you put in some backward running, you don't see it very often. Well done man!

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    Re: Orange Fight 101 (unfinished)

    You generally bring more flare to your animations than most beginners. Good work

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    Re: Orange Fight 101 (unfinished)

    Quote Originally Posted by Blot
    that old school flow. I love it.
    my thoughts exactly.

    Try fixing up the spacing a little, it looks quite shaky.

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    Re: Orange Fight 101 (unfinished)

    Why shouldn't you finish that?
    It reminded me loads of Jon with the innovative angles and stuff.
    Keep going i'd say!

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    Re: Orange Fight 101 (unfinished)

    That was some really good 3D. Nice work dude.

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    Re: Orange Fight 101 (unfinished)

    Always nice to see beginners trying different angles and perspectives. It really sets you out from the rest, trust me. Keep at it, buddy!


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