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    Little Combo

    Backfoot is shaky towards the end, cant be assed fixing it.



    Just realised how terrible this is fucking lol

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    Really good stuff man. I like the impact it has, especially the kick!

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    Yea man that was actually pretty good. It wasn't terrible at all. The only thing I didn't like was how both his arms came together at the end in front of him and kind of stuck together. You should still try to move them separately. Like instead of placing them right on top of each other, space the arms out a little bit. One thing I always like to do in my animations is keep the space between the stickmans arms around the same distance as the space between his feet on the ground. For some reason I feel like that always produces a more natural looking pose. Maybe it's just me.

    Wow I really nit picked at that, sorry I know it's in freestyle. It's good to see you animating again though. It's been awhile.
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    It wasn't terrible at all man!
    The only thing I would take a look at is the movement at the end, it looks a bit weird, but other than that it's great!

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