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    Even More Wraybies

    Wraybies tut, thought about posting it, I'll keep doing more in order to improve and become the 6th Hokage (:
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    Last edited by Ussay; 05 Nov 2013 at 07:22 PM. Reason: Even More Wrabyess
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    That was really nice, the blocking (I think that's what it's called?) at the beginning was a little odd, but I'm just going off of Wray's animations.
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    Tuck the last flip some more, you can't get that much momentum when you're not fully tucked.

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    Looks really good! You need to improve on the physics, but it looks pretty good overall

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    Quote Originally Posted by K leb View Post
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    you need more momentum horizontally in the roundoff, and to put the legs down at the exact same time. the back tuck should be tucked much more and remember to make him use his arms to hold his legs. the majority of the flexion should be in the hips, with the knees at a 90 degree ish angle and not too much torso bend. otherwise good job, and nice physics. I like how, because he was going very slow, you didn't use blocking.
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    God dammit Reap.

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    lol.

    Ok thanks Wraybies, I'll try to make more soon (Y)

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    There's a new one, is it better? :dD

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    Use 2 more frames for the cartwheel and you're good.

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