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    First anim in 3 months.

    This is my first animation from 3 months ago when my main laptop broke. I luckily backed up most of my stuff besides the recent stuff that was on my harddrive before my laptop broke. This is pretty much the amount of skill I have left compared to my most recent/better projects.



    Any thoughts?

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    there is a problem with foot placement when the spikes come and the man jumps
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    Quote Originally Posted by bullzeye View Post
    there is a problem with foot placement when the spikes come and the man jumps
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    This is freestlye lol, you dont get courtesy on a freestyle thread.

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    Ew the colours are really gross. Might be the way my computer displays it but I can barely see what's happening.

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    Yeah, the figure colour and background are too similar. Not enough contrast.

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    Yeah ive gotten numerous comments about the colors. In my head I had it planned out better but this was my fault for the bad outcome. Sorry.

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    The placement of his legs and the spikes makes it seem that there is no reason for him to jump over them. It looks like he is in front of the spikes and that they are in the back. Either move the spikes down and make them visible on the floor or move his legs up so it actually looks like he needs to avoid them. I hope this makes sense, I'm really tired and shit.
    Edit: And like everyone said, the colors are awful.
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    i cant see the movements because of weird colours ;c
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    Thank you for the comments guys, I appreciate it!

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    i'm really srry for that post i thought as if it was the beginners hall and didn't saw ur avatar too just posted
    lots of sorries for it


 
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