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Thread: My run

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    Fresh Newbie Akaton's Avatar
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    Cool My run

    Well, I'm beginner on the pivot, and that's my run

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    What do you think about it? Please comment.

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    +1 for moving quite everything in each frame
    +1 for not having any choppy movements

    but...

    It's very short and unoriginal, i see run anims everywhere, and someday they'll make me sick.
    The run does not flow well, because of these 2 stop&go-ish frames (the moment when the limbs are extended)

    Try to do longer animations. I can't give any precise "rating" over such short cycles.

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    I think you should've thrown in a bit more frames in there to make it smoother and add a bit more detail I guess, I'm pretty bad at running myself, but this wasn't that bad from what I've seen. 6/10


 

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