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Thread: FreeStyle Thread- Easing Test

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    FreeStyle Thread- Easing Test

    My new Easing Test!


    Tell me anything I need to work on. I am a beginner!
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    The way he pulled off that kick was pretty bad, it seemed like he just put his foot and pushed him down, the speed effect implies that there was some hefty force to it, so the ground should've tremored upon impact and that area where the guy got hit should've been dented in, also when he hit the floor it would've looked better if he bounced up a *BIT*, not a lot. Idk about your easing because the frames skip and seem a bit choppy. But yea it just looks like the red dude was pushed down, not kicked down.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DonnyCraft View Post
    My new Easing Test!


    Tell me anything I need to work on. I am a beginner!
    Yep, I know and I saw all my mistakes. Also, the blue guy did a turn over somersault kick, and the red guy *was* kinda pushed down, as he was about to break into a fast run with his head down yet was somersault kicked into the ground. Thank you for telling me these!
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    Here's my next animation, guys!
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    no
    theres a lot of stiffness and choppiness, and the recoil is stiff
    the fingers bother me

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ashero1 View Post
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    theres a lot of stiffness and choppiness, and the recoil is stiff
    the fingers bother me
    I think the same, also it's really short so it's hard to give a good judge.

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    pretty good , that kick needs more of a snap though


 

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