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    My Poetry

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    Re: My Poetry

    I liked the perspective feel of it. Your poem really lets me see the pain you're describing.

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    Re: My Poetry

    It's not that bad really, though I'm no real fan of poetry.

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    Re: My Poetry

    Thanks for the comments.


    One of my mates actually cried when they heard that one

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    Re: My Poetry

    Dude, you could go into business with this stuff, i like your work.

    "As a Free man would say, I work, to live for the nex day,
    But I am no free man, Bound, by these cold, iron chains."

    thats a lil bit from me, about 1 min of thinking ^^

    im not so good at poetry.
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