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    Enthusiast Moshed Potatoes's Avatar

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    Dixtana's Wonderful Thread of Wonderment

    AND IT'S MIIIIINE.

    So yeah. I'm more of a writer than anything else, so I'll post all my literary works here :B And you can't say you're not excited. CAUSE IF YOU DO I'LL CHOP OFF YOUR BALLS. AND DON'T THINK I WON'T. And you can't say that can't happen, because I already know you're all male!!!!

    And I do poetry lots too.

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    I've been alone all along
    No one to wipe away my tears.
    I feel cold, alone, and useless too.
    Almost like there's no hope left,
    nothing else to do.
    I've been ignored and pushed away.
    I think over and over, "Is it worth it to stay?"
    I feel cold and apathetic, like I have no heart,
    Wondering if there's not end to pain
    and only a start.
    My heart is beaten
    So it turned to stone
    My pain stands everywhere,
    even in my bones.
    I feel like I'm in a cell, they've thrown away the key.
    Like there's no one left, except my sanity and me.
    I'm invisible to the ones I love,
    And stuck in this world of solitude.
    There's nothing left for me, except
    misery.
    I try to remember the good times, day after day.
    But all I can see and hear is the pain
    as I fade away.

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    Comments/Critique are welcome. But if you just spam me with useless comments I'll pwn ur @$$ hrd bitches. Luv ya~
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    Re: Dixtana's Wonderful Thread of Wonderment

    TOO FRIGIN' SAD. AND DEPRESSING. AND DUMB. you need to make it happier, or at least make it have happy ending. *Runs an hides under desk*
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    Re: Dixtana's Wonderful Thread of Wonderment

    Well, this is written from her point of view, so...
    Nice, althought the rhyme scheme was a bit off in parts.

    Also, I'm very excited about your literature. No ball-chopping please.
    *Cups balls*

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    Re: Dixtana's Wonderful Thread of Wonderment

    I won't hurt you Blue~ MONKEYMINT..on the other hand *growl* Nah jk. Thanks ^^
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    Re: Dixtana's Wonderful Thread of Wonderment

    can you do a dr seuss style poem / children's story

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    Re: Dixtana's Wonderful Thread of Wonderment

    Quote Originally Posted by pivot demonkatana
    can you do a dr seuss style poem / children's story
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