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    Re: The Greater Beings

    More like a report than a story. If thats the effect it was meant to have then good i guess. Lots of well used complex vocabulary.
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    Re: The Greater Beings

    That was really clever, good job.
    A few minor grammatical things that could be improved, but I really loved the concept.
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