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    Sepulchural Sentients

    Damien sauntered down a cold, unforgiving alley in Rend. Shadows, cast by debris lit up by gas fires, flickered to and fro as the flames danced around like fireflies in the still air. The rough, groaning wind brushed over him like the sea brushes over the rocks in a violent storm. Ever since they came, things had taken a turn for the worse. A big turn.

    Just as he was about to turn out of the forbidding alley, the weather changed from a gentle breeze to a harsh howling gale as fast as a lightning strike. Damien leaned against the wall and waited for the sudden weather change to pass by, but as he was about to learn, he wouldn't get that luxury without a fight.

    He stood against the wall as the shadows themselves began to move. They floated through the air into the middle of the alley, blocking the exit. He turned around on his heel to retreat, but another group of shadows began to twist and turn like a typhoon. Finally, the shadows descended to the ground, and two shapes appeared inside of each.

    Both were obviously the same race, but they looked quite different. Their similarities were that the both had black 'skin', if it was even skin. The one blocking the exit was thin and almost human, but it's mouth was a pair of vicious-looking mandibles, lined with razor-like teeth. It's legs and arms ended in sharp, curved claws, which looked like they had had plenty of practice, looking at the amount of blood on them. It's whole body was teeming with muscles, which were all tense with the excitement of the hunt. The thing's head sported a pair of black, crooked horns, which sprouted out of it's spiked head.

    The other thing was larger than Damien, and it's body was also abundant with muscles. It had two tails, which both ended in sharp blades attached to one side. On it's head, it also displayed two horns, which were both had a red ring on them. It had four arms, and two of them ended in scything blades, the other two were holding swords. It's legs were long, giving it even more height to it's lumbering bulk. Satanic Soldiers. They were both intent on killing Damien, so they launched forward immediately.

    To be continued...
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    Re: Sepulchural Sentients

    That was extremely good, man. I enjoyed reading it and could imagine what was happening perfectly. Can't wait till the continuation, awesome job.
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    Re: Sepulchural Sentients

    XD im only 13
    Fools lead to destruction, it is true. But power brings chaos. Power is abused to wreak havoc on this earth.
    http://www.youtube.com/user/Shadowpivoter9000R

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