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    Enthusiast Moshed Potatoes's Avatar

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    Music

    Pounding beats
    Round and round
    Make me wanna touch the ground
    Reach the sky
    Soar up high
    On my personal high.

    Creative and entirely your own
    A favorite for every zone
    Rock n' roll
    R&B
    Ska
    Jazz
    An easy.

    Free of verse
    Only sound
    Make this world go
    Up and down

    Flying through riffs and chords
    Techno pounding
    Roll-call sounding
    Dirges
    Operas
    Musical
    Sound

    Make this world
    So full of sound.

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    Lighter than the last poem I posted ^^ Hope you likes it
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    Re: Music

    Quote Originally Posted by WinterWeapon
    Pounding beats
    Round and round
    Make me wanna touch the ground
    Reach the sky
    Soar up high
    On my personal high.

    Creative and entirely your own
    A favorite for every zone
    Rock n' roll
    R&B
    Ska
    Jazz
    An easy.

    Free of verse
    Only sound
    Make this world go
    Up and down

    Flying through riffs and chords
    Techno pounding
    Roll-call sounding
    Dirges
    Operas
    Musical
    Sound

    Make this world
    So full of sound.

    ------------------

    Lighter than the last poem I posted ^^ Hope you likes it
    i dont like it
    i love it
    [center:3mz8yq62][/center:3mz8yq62]

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    Re: Music

    Almost a bump xD...

    Anyway I really like the voice in it, it's a really great point with a great choice of words and it incorporates anyone who may be reading it. The only trouble spot I found was in that there was no constant flow of your words. Nothing to define a rhythm, or beat through that whole thing. Otherwise great work, I liked it.

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