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Thread: And. He. Was.

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    Enthusiast Moshed Potatoes's Avatar

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    And. He. Was.

    There once was a boy
    Who loved to write
    And he saw the world in monotone colors
    And he liked to sing
    His parents were nice
    And his teacher gave him stars
    And his sister was born
    And the man kept coming by
    And daddy would watch out for son
    And he. Was. Young.

    There once was a boy
    Who loved to play guitar
    And he saw the world in monotone colors
    And he liked to write
    His parents would argue
    And his teacher gave him A's
    And his sister wore makeup
    And the man kept coming by
    And daddy would only sometimes talk to son.
    And he. Was. Still. Young.

    There once was a boy
    Who loved to be alone
    And he saw the world in monotone colors
    And he liked to play guitar
    His parents would fight
    And his teachers gave him A's but no words
    And his sister was gone all the time
    And the man took him away
    And returned him spoiled and confused
    And daddy never talked to his son.
    And he. Was. Still. Young.

    There once was a boy
    Who loved to do terrible things to himself
    And he saw the world in monotone colors
    And he liked to be alone
    And his parents wouldn't talk to each other
    And his teachers gave him A's and strange looks
    And his sister was missing
    And the old man died one day.
    And daddy was ignoring his son.
    And he. Was. Still Young.

    There once was a boy
    Who sat in the bathroom
    And he saw the world in monotone colors
    And he loved to do terrible things to himself
    And his parents were divorced
    And his teachers gave him F's
    And his sister was still missing
    And the old man was dead.
    And daddy disowned his son
    And he. Was. Still. Young.

    There once was a boy.
    Who slit his cursed wrists
    And saw the world in monotone colors
    And he sat in the bathroom
    His parents were away
    And he dropped out of school
    His sister was presumed dead
    The old man was dead.
    And he was to be dead soon too.
    And now. He. Is. Gone.

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    Tad depressing. Any questions, just ask. Com/Crit welcome. No flames plz.
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    Re: And. He. Was.

    rather depressing but awsome
    did u write this?
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    Re: And. He. Was.

    Yeah lol
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    Re: And. He. Was.

    Nice job. Gave me chills up my spine. But it's depressing...


 

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