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  1. #1
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    No Way Out joint

    Okay this is a joint between myself and Acemonkid.

    Brohole: Chapter 1 – Blood-Stained Grass

    “Ahh!”, I complained. Tracing the shape of my neck with my fingers, my mind became flooded with horrific pictures.
    I saw a dark, mysterious man, wearing a hood to conceal his face.
    This sent a chill down my back. How could something so mysterious be good? I concentrated hard, trying to provoke my nightmarish epiphany.
    Shortly after, the man started to pace back and forth, never taking his eyes off me – not that I could tell what he was doing under the shadow of his cloak – and eventually settled not 5 steps in front of me. It all happened frighteningly fast after that. In the same second, the figure launched himself forward, curling his lips over his razor-sharp teeth into a menacing grin, and I widened my eyes in horror. Then it happened. Sending a dreadful shriek up into the night sky, he thrust his head down to my neck.

    My mind showed nothing more than that. It was disturbingly clear what had happened, though I didn’t dare to think it. Looking around me, I saw nothing but red grass in every direction, blood still gushing out of my neck. Quickly I placed my hand over the sickening holes in my throat, content to for now.
    What was I supposed to do? I didn’t even know where I was! The only thing I could see was grass, and the occasional tree, all lit up by the glimmer of a full moon. Gathering my sanity, I sat up, feeling the squelch of blood-stained grass beneath my feet.

    “Ah, good, you’re awake! Finally we can have some more fun!”

    Instincts forced me to spin around, despite the agonizing pain coming from my neck. There stood the same menacing man from my memory. I knew because of the distinctive cloak, that no one in the 21st century would wear.
    He was casually standing 10 metres away, his teeth gleaming. Fear engulfed me in a wave of hopelessness. There was no way that I’d survive. If he could do this to my neck, then surely I would be easy to dispose of. Ah, hope, you had deserted me so, to such an extent that I was shivering.
    I was going to die.
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    Re: Death is a Gift - also LOOKING FOR JOINT

    i like the story.
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    Re: Death is a Gift - also LOOKING FOR JOINT

    Thanks man
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    Re: Death is a Gift - also LOOKING FOR JOINT

    I would joint with you if you start. Nice story, i didn't read it all because i have migran c:
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    Re: Death is a Gift - also LOOKING FOR JOINT

    Quote Originally Posted by Acemonkid
    I would joint with you if you start. Nice story, i didn't read it all because i have migran c:
    K, I'll start, and then I'll change this thread to the joint. I'll pm you when i'm done.

    p.s. sorry i took so long; computer was stuffed for a while. I do tend to favor the suspense and stuff, but other themes are fine too hope your migran's better.
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    Re: No Way Out joint

    i think i would like a joint.
    ill be the swat dudes
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    Re: No Way Out joint

    you mean where we add on to it? ill help i guess....
    woot this website actually has a literature section! WOOTWOOTWOOTWOTO!


    i like the vampire theme...or whatever you're planning on making this

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