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    Say goodbye (for mah rayly ^^)

    I look to the stars, but god offers no help.
    I look to the earth, but nature offers no reward.

    I look all around, Yet not one persons stops to pause.

    Why is it, that when i see your face, my very heart stops?
    My veins flow with lifeblood, but the thought of you makes the flow stop.
    All i can do is think about you, over my brain, i have no control.

    You set me on fire, you douse me with ice.
    Its all i can do, to be a part of your device.

    Raylen, you came into my life.
    I stopped and i turned, taken aghast by surprise.
    You said i was cute, i said you were wrong.
    we argued all night, until I gave up.

    This week we go out, oh the fun we shall have.
    While you get drunk, i stare deeply into your eyes.
    I only want to hold you close, its my one wish.
    The one wish i'd do anything for.

    I'd cross the sea with my bare hands and my arms.
    I'd run a thousand miles, fight a thousand men.
    Just to get to your heart.

    And find my place, Until you say.

    Just until you say.

    Goodbye.



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    Re: Say goodbye (for mah rayly ^^)

    It's nice to see some love in this forum.
    *Skips away*
    Nah it was OK.
    Nice work.

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    Re: Say goodbye (for mah rayly ^^)

    BARBIE DOLL. No seriously. Is that a doll?

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    Re: Say goodbye (for mah rayly ^^)

    i bet you live in oklahoma >.>

    mwuahahahaha
    liked the poem, girl was a little BIG HEADED? or small bodied for my taste.
    still, epic poem

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    Re: Say goodbye (for mah rayly ^^)

    Quote Originally Posted by *Blind*
    i bet you live in oklahoma >.>

    mwuahahahaha
    liked the poem, girl was a little BIG HEADED? or small bodied for my taste.
    still, epic poem
    It's her hair that makes her look big headed/small bodied.

    Nice poem, (inspired me to write one for my girlfriend, Will.I.Am's It's A New Day also inspired me to write it.)


 

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