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  1. #1
    i fux wit it Snake's Avatar

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    Poem For My Girlfriend

    Yeah, for Valentine's Day, I thought I'd write a poem for my girlfriend. I showed her what I have so far (but I'm not going to show her any more until Valentine's Day,) and she liked it. So here it is:

    We live in different worlds
    With large spaces inbetween
    Our Love is unpredictable
    It seems it has no theme
    But one thing that I do know
    One thing I know for sure
    Is the cute smile on your face
    When I come knocking on your door.

    ---

    Thoughts? (I tried ) (Will be updated on Valentine's, or the day after.)

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    Re: Poem For My Girlfriend

    Haha it's okay i'd like to hear more, it isn't to good but if she likes than you scored heehee. Wow i'm gay... =D
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    Re: Poem For My Girlfriend

    More cheese please?!?
    Seriously, buy her a dildo for valentines, no girl wants poems now a days.

    As for the poem, it seemed ok till the last line. Knocking on your door seems a bit/very lame.
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    Re: Poem For My Girlfriend

    Yeah. I'm getting her some other stuff too, though. :P (also, it says I tried, I'm obviously not the best )
    Also, @CodeMachine: sure and door (I say sure like shore some times, and other people around where I live do too.)
    @Mackeo: Yeah, I agree with the door line thing blah, but meh.


 

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