Okay so, getting straight to the point; this story originally started off as a role play in the 'Roleplay' section of a forum dedicated to the game: SPORE.

SPORE role plays involve many users involving themselves in some sort of a storyline, taking turns to post messages and, in turn, altering the course of a story. They can use their various creations as their RPers or just main characters from that species.

My role play: 'ACRIS' started out like this and I thought it became very interesting as only three of us were playing, proving for a less jumbled storyline.
I thought it went on so well that I decided to make an official story.

I've split it up into sections and put in links so as not to mess up the DD forum layout.
(Read from the top down)

Prologue

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Chapter one: Arrival

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This may seem long, but it's far from finished. xD