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  1. #1
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    PLEASE READ, I ACTUALLY PUT SOME TIME INTO SOMETHING.

    poem by me > (NOT REALLY)

    poetry will be updated as i make them

    here i sit, broken hearted
    had to shit but only farted

    jk poem not a real one by me.

    REAL POEMS:
    falling down this eternal hole;
    falling with almost to much pain;
    digging deeper into my soul;
    all these things i cant obtain;
    feeling hate, feeling sick;
    nothing more or less to say;
    almost like getting kicked;
    now here i am, here i lay;
    kicking and screaming through my dream;
    feeling hate, feeling death;
    all i hear are my putrid screams;
    running out of all my breath;
    i see my fate, i see my hell;
    heaven so far away;
    my hearts about to swell;
    almost time for day;
    here i lay, in my well.

    :3

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    Re: PLEASE READ, I ACTUALLY PUT SOME TIME INTO SOMETHING.

    best poem on darkdemon in my opionon (bad spelling LOL).
    there were some parts that didnt rym well. (more bad spelling LOL).
    but all in all it was great. i really like the fake poem
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