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    Seek Not My Heart

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    Re: Un-named poetry.

    It's great! The rhyme scheme is wonderful. Good job :'D
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    Re: Seek Not My Heart

    Heh, thanks. I made it for an English assignment, hopefully it'll get a good grade..

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    Re: Seek Not My Heart

    A+, great rhyme scheme, nice wording, a good meter, and quite a good beat.
    I congratulate you.

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    Re: Seek Not My Heart

    I've never really been a poetry person. So when I read your poem I was surprised to find that, I thought it was great! You'd better get a good grade, or your teacher should be fired. Kudos dude.

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    Re: Seek Not My Heart

    Nice poem there! I liked it good luck hope you will get A+ : D
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    Re: Seek Not My Heart

    I am conjuring up a request quite sick,
    Would thou like to suck mine dick?

    Ok, ok jk. I actually loved how fluid it was. I don't usually like rhyming poems for their sense of immaturity, but this one seems sort of grown-up so to speak. Good job. A++
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    Re: Seek Not My Heart

    *Claps hands quickly* OH VERY DANDEH! *forcefully chugs self with a gallon of tea* I SAY OLD CHAP, THIS IS QUITE FTW!
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    Re: Seek Not My Heart

    Quote Originally Posted by Mitch
    *Claps hands quickly* OH VERY DANDEH! *forcefully chugs self with a gallon of tea* I SAY OLD CHAP, THIS IS QUITE FTW!
    Are you suggesting that I'm from the UK?

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    He's generalizing the formality of the poem with the stereotypical "Tea time" fable. Most English people are not so considerate anymore. Look at Bing and Tomska
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