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    Demons Vs Angels

    *Yawn* I opened my eyes slowly turning my head to the alarm clock. 6:50 AM....Crap *moan* School is such a drag why do I have to go anyways? College and that crap...Righhhhhhhht. I rubbed the sleep out of my eyes and got up. flickered my lights on and turned the bronze handle on the door. It opened with a creeeeeeeek.I dragged my feet upstairs.

    I poured the milk into my coffee added the sugar and stirred it. Mmmmm It tasted so good. After that I did my normal routine you know went brushed my teeth but when I saw my face In the mirror. My eyes had changed color...From a deep green blue to a mean dark dark orange. I put in my brothers contact lens he was out of town and was wearing glasses so it wasn't much of a big deal.



    What do you think should I continue?


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    Re: Demons Vs Angels

    what's with this *moan* stuff? sounds more like something that happened to you this morning instead of a story.
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    Re: Demons Vs Angels

    Yup I know it sucked - I was not even trying atall.


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    Re: Demons Vs Angels

    Quote Originally Posted by ownd
    Yup I know it sucked - I was not even trying atall.
    Then why post it?

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    Re: Demons Vs Angels

    Lol, it lacked detail, and it was very linear.

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    Re: Demons Vs Angels

    If you want to do anything with this, at least change the title. It's too similar to Angels and Demons, by Dan Brown, I wouldn't take anything seriously with a title like that.

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    Re: Demons Vs Angels

    lock this It was late at night when I wrote this and I think it sucks.


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