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    Assassins Creed

    A vast crowd bustled underneath the bell tower. Each person in it shuffling against eachother, trying to see the man on the wooden platform at the front. He was Paulo D' Katiya. The main chief of the guards of Acre. He held his arms out. Outstretching them to full length and spoke: "Citizens of Acre!". He roared. "We have lived under the eye of Assassins for too long!. I say no more!". The bell tower rang and a large bird with silver and dark grey feathers darted out from under it with a shriek. As the bell swung back. A man stepped out from behind it. Altair. In his long white cloak. He clenched his fist as Paulo gave another tiring speech. He briefly wondered if he could hit him with a throwing knife from the angle he was looking at him from. But dismissed the idea. The only way to take his life was to get close. But with the amount of people and guards around him. That would be near impossible.
    Well...for a normal person...

    Altair looked at his surroundings. Through the crowd he saw a hay bail. He spread his arms like wings and closed his eyes. Then he leapt. Paulo screamed at his guards as Altair climbed out the hay. They sprinted at him as Altair pulled his sword out...

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    Re: Assassins Creed

    So basically you're just writing the exact intro.

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    Re: Assassins Creed

    That's really creative. No body has ever done anything like that before.[/sarcasm]

    Seriously why? It's just an exact replica of a scene from the game?
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    Re: Assassins Creed

    Wow that was a total copy, except for the names that you came up with. Also Altair has a hidden blade not a sword.
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    Re: Assassins Creed

    Quote Originally Posted by Cyborg 2.0
    Wow that was a total copy, except for the names that you came up with. Also Altair has a hidden blade not a sword.
    He also has a sword you know..
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    Re: Assassins Creed

    I don't see the point of this thread.

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    Re: Assassins Creed

    looks very exciting.
    even though i didn't read it
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    Re: Assassins Creed

    Quote Originally Posted by animtorsaur
    looks very exciting.
    even though i didn't read it
    How can it look exciting? They're words.

    I really don't see the point of this either.
    Boredom?

    I guess it would make sense if you tried to analyze his actions and reasoning, but this is just boring because we already know what happens.
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    Re: Assassins Creed

    no, it was the exact scene from the game, really creative. wheres the point of it?
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