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    Trying to start poetry (for school).

    Is it too much?
    Or just too little?
    For I am lost,
    In this empty riddle

    Trying to find
    Wanting to be
    That one of a kind,
    That might be me.

    Deeper I dig
    To see what remains
    The more I can't,
    Understand these pains.

    I smell the gold
    but the sight's unclear
    My dreams can't hold,
    I no longer care.
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    very good, and a clear messege. im a poem writer actually. if you want to improve and share your poetry with more poetry writers, i suggest checking out www.allpoetry.com i am already aa use there, (anonymous ninja) and my family is too. i have quite a few poems, and ive really improved by joining it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zelda
    very good, and a clear messege. im a poem writer actually. if you want to improve and share your poetry with more poetry writers, i suggest checking out http://www.allpoetry.com i am already aa use there, (anonymous ninja) and my family is too. i have quite a few poems, and ive really improved by joining it.
    Thanks. I didn't think the message was clear. I'll pass on that allpoetry website. I just write stuff like this (or draw) when I'm bored. It just for school...I guess. My teacher gives credit for writing poems and since I need an A in that class, I did this.
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