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    Misery

    I live in your heart.
    And I sleep in your soul.
    More costly than gems,
    More precious than gold.
    I live all around you
    Even in your bones.

    My power is awesome
    Submerge, you'll see
    But if you do
    You'll never go free
    Use me once
    I might let you go
    Take me again
    I'll own your soul

    I'll take everything from you
    Your appearance and pride
    But I'll still be right there
    Right by your side

    If you embrace me
    What will you gain?
    If given a chance
    I'll drive you insane.
    I'll destroy your body
    Take over your mind
    You'll be owned completely
    Your soul will be mine

    But you came to me
    I did not to you
    And do not forget
    You know it's true.
    I'll be your owner
    You'll be my slave
    You can take me with you
    As you lie in your grave

    I brought you more misery
    Than words can tell
    Come.
    Give me your hand.
    I'll lead you to hell.
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    Re: Misery

    What are you,emo...Lolz
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    Re: Misery

    Quote Originally Posted by Toasty
    What are you,emo...Lolz
    You are so fucking stupid it is incomprehensible.
    This is an emotional poem. It is not "Emolol" or "Fucking gothic", it's simply an emotional poem.

    Drop the fucking noob speak, learn to type grammar, and most important of all, get some fucking knowledge of stereotypes.

    You make me rage.


    Also, very nice poem Winter. The name owns.
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    Re: Misery

    Fuck man calm down,i wasen't serious,i was just bored so i wanted to post that.
    Of course i know its an emotional poem.


    And try to use correct grammar when you go to an french school,bastard...
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    Re: Misery

    Quote Originally Posted by Toasty
    Fuck man calm down,i wasen't serious,i was just bored so i wanted to post that.
    Of course i know its an emotional poem.


    And try to use correct grammar when you go to an french school,bastard...
    They seriously don't teach you proper english grammar at a french school? Hmm.
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    Re: Misery

    Well,its just that they aren't telling us to study grammar but,i just suck at grammar,like french like english...
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    Re: Misery

    Quote Originally Posted by Toasty
    Well,its just that they aren't telling us to study grammar but,i just suck at grammar,like french like english...
    Not an excuse. This is an english-speaking forum, you don't really have any reason to be on here anyway. I'm not being racist, just don't go whining when people criticise your bad grammar.

    Anyway, that was a nice poem. I can't really add much, I'm not really a fan of poetry (poetic lyrics to a song are a different matter..) but it was nice
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    Re: Misery

    it was ok but very basic

    it didn't create a particularly strong image for me and it was kinda predictable

    but not terrible
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    Re: Misery

    Thanks you guys
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    Re: Misery

    Good job.
    Keep reading poetry!
    Sweet.
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