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    Re: Crono's Rhymes

    They are all fucking awesome, who won the battle though ?

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    Re: Crono's Rhymes

    Haha, all of these are pretty good man. I liked the third and fourth ones the best. This stanza in particular:
    "I'ma flow-it, like Edgar Allen Poe-it.
    Suspended in orbit, I take a bong hit,
    I come crashing down like a comet."

    Was awesome.
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    Re: Crono's Rhymes

    Quote Originally Posted by Lithium
    They are all fucking awesome, who won the battle though ?
    Jon says mine were better, but I think it was a tie to be honest. He beat me twice, and I beat him twice in my opinion. (The last one doesn't count)

    Quote Originally Posted by Liam
    Haha, all of these are pretty good man. I liked the third and fourth ones the best. This stanza in particular:
    "I'ma flow-it, like Edgar Allen Poe-it.
    Suspended in orbit, I take a bong hit,
    I come crashing down like a comet."

    Was awesome.
    Word. I like that stanza too. But the one after is better.
    Thanks for the comment haha.
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    Re: Crono's Rhymes

    Good shit
    Two things though:
    1. They aren't the same amount of syllables throughout, but that's just a personal thing for me.
    2. Shouldn't it be "aughta" not "outta"? Outta is like out of, like "get outta here".

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    Yah good shit crono. I might of won one, IMO. You put alot more thought into your rhymes.

    Ill post mine soon in this thread.
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    Re: Crono's Rhymes

    Quote Originally Posted by Foxhound
    Good shit
    Two things though:
    1. They aren't the same amount of syllables throughout, but that's just a personal thing for me.
    2. Shouldn't it be "aughta" not "outta"? Outta is like out of, like "get outta here".
    1. Iambic Pentameter is BORING! Naw, just kidding. I like it, but fuck the rules.
    2. Good point! DERP! Thanks man.

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    Re: Crono's Rhymes

    "C'mon fool try and retaliate,
    you outta be an ill MC if you rap even half as much as you masturbate."
    lmao.

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    "Your liquid sword ain't shit,
    you gotta steam dagger and you're missin every hit."

    Was awesome. They were all pretty decent. Try and write something longer with more coherence/meaning, I'd like to see how it turns out.
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    Re: Crono's Rhymes

    Haha, I liked the first one the best. I wish there were more lines like that in the freestyle thread. Kinda sick of hearing the ones that sound like "I gotta itch. You is my bitch. Word."

    cough cough, Ozzy. lmao


 

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