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    Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    [center:37q2vgl5]1. Before The Rose[/center:37q2vgl5]

    [center:37q2vgl5]Verse 1:[/center:37q2vgl5]
    [center:37q2vgl5]Before the rose goes and 'wits-away'.
    I'll cast my 'guilt-astray' so I can 'fill-my-day'.
    With the thoughts of your presence and your 'graceful-laugh'.
    Hoping the 'faith-will-last' because I'd 'hate-to-ask'.
    You if your 'statement's-masked' the feelings 'faced-and-grasped'.
    For our 'relations-past', I want a 'patient-task'.
    I want to 'take-it-slow', 'wait-to-know' you so that we don't 'break-the-flow'.
    The 'sacred-woe' which 'fate-will-show' your presence seems to 'make-me-glow'.
    I'm 'missing-the-light' you radiate, it's 'lifting-me-high'.
    You 'listen-and-shine' to every 'written-I-rhyme'.
    I feel a 'difference-inside', I think of 'kissing-your-eyes'.
    'Wishing-the-skies' would bless me with the 'gift-of-the-night'.
    So my 'visions-are-blind' and I can know this 'isn't-a-lie'.
    When I'm 'sitting-beside' you as you place your 'lips-onto-mine'.
    I'm 'itching-to-find' someone as 'amazing-as-you'.
    Or two eyes that are beautiful when 'gazing-into'.
    I'm 'stating-the-truth' and 'baby-I-knew'.
    You were the one now I'm 'paying-my-dues', 'laying-the-clues'.
    Through my lyrics cause I know that this has gotta be 'true-love'.
    I picture couples getting jealous as they 'view-us'.
    Baby can we 'start-a-new'? It's not 'hard-to-do'.
    Our 'hearts-approve', so lets join our 'parts-of-two'.
    Into one whole spirit and 'discard-the-views'.
    Of anyones opinion on the 'paths-we-choose'.[/center:37q2vgl5]

    [center:37q2vgl5]Chorus: (x2) (Sing)[/center:37q2vgl5]
    [center:37q2vgl5](Before the rose) Now I'm sitting here feeling 'so confused'.
    (Wilts away) I've got so many 'unspoken views'.
    (I pray that the petals) You're the one who I look for to 'see my heart'.
    (Fall into place) & I just want to know where I 'need to start'.


    Verse 2:
    I wanna feel how my fingertips would 'graze-through-your-hair'.
    How my 'days-would-appear' with you 'always-being-there'.
    Pray the 'fragrance-you-wear' ever 'stays-in-the-air'.
    'Amazed-by-the-care' of your eyes as I 'gaze-at-the-pair'.
    But I've 'wasted-a-year' of my life 'holding-back'.
    'Bold-impact', now I feel my hearts 'cold-and-cracked'.
    When I first met you, your beauty left me 'breathless'.
    Baby I 'confess this', the feelings made me 'restless'.
    When I feel your heart it's like my 'burden's-erased'.
    You 'converted-the-space' between a 'flirt-and-a-taste'.
    You were 'quirky-with-grace' and 'asserted-your-face'.
    In my mind where I saw the little 'smirk-you-could-trace'.
    Now I'm 'hurt-in-a-place' that I never 'thought-I-had'.
    'Fought-the-sad' love bug, but I 'caught-it-bad'.
    Cause every little thing about you is 'immaculate'.
    And now I know that cupids arrow's always 'accurate'.[/center:37q2vgl5]

    [center:37q2vgl5]Chorus: (x2) (Sing)[/center:37q2vgl5]
    [center:37q2vgl5](Before the rose) Now I'm sitting here feeling 'so confused'.
    (Wilts away) I've got so many 'unspoken views'.
    (I pray that the petals) You're the one who I look for to 'see my heart'.
    (Fall into place) & I just want to know where I 'need to start'.





    2. Part 1, The Greatest Trick[/center:37q2vgl5]


    [center:37q2vgl5]Yo, the greatest trick ever pulled, was by me
    no rabbits out of hats no cats getting sliced in three
    No pigeons hidden within the sleeves of my jacket
    no assistance needed cuz i ain’t speaking ‘bout magic
    It’s tragic, a hoax right under the noses of the audience
    Shocked till they pausing and smile at the applauses and...
    Drop the rawest blend of curses with deliberate faults
    Deliver the most surprising shit and quiver the host
    They shiver at most, cos competition matched them
    smacked them, into fractions, embarrassed n slapped ‘em
    what the fuck is happening? How he get lyrically fresh?
    cuz my pens in his hand, palms more spirit than flesh
    Exhibit the depths that we went through, for victory
    wondering how sick he is, biggest fucking mystery
    Underestimated, underdogs, they says hes too weak
    But motherfuckers have be to clairvoyants to see thru me
    A beast with speech, killing TWO birds with ONE stone
    how he suddenly get ill with words is unknown?
    No, soldier with no weaponry, enemies sleepin’ on him
    so I grab the initiative and, pull the trigger for him
    True lies, acting, double bluff you guys, spastics
    To dumb to realize what's happenin', that's it...
    I mastered, the art of being a free spirit
    So these critics, be gifting me, with these merits
    Partner? he's through, but this dude he's cool, he's new
    I'd like to thank my enemy for complimenting me too

    Part two, The Breakable Army

    Breakable Army
    Ayo,
    Indestructible, such a word doesn’t relate
    To an army with dozens of fakes, puzzling traits
    Nothing but hate, and this percussion is bait
    to the brothers who slate, with combustible fates
    I lust for the days, where combat was ‘bout brute strength
    now it’s a nuisance, to get ruthless, clowns are too dense
    And the clouds are too dark, its reigns on my head
    the fact that I gotta sell my soul to be ‘made’ with the pen
    I fade with no friends, while I spout my credentials
    Soldier recruited before he ever showed his potential
    My words are essentials but its more than eventful
    when I pick my weapon of choice n disrespect fools
    Cuz, I see an army, with weird queers and these
    fake cat shedding tears all over their machinery
    Fearing me, poor skill no quality, shoulda quit, stat
    I grip the sick gat, ya’ll still with the wooden pick axe
    Fuck the chit-chat, this that, check the signs mayne
    Army of Lies, brain washing ya mindframe
    So I, Break ribs, crunch spines, you fake kid? Its lunch time
    Sprayed quick, clutch minds, its basic, I crush guys
    Discuss pride, because I know I got plenty of it
    Get slapped by reality when the pennies droppin’
    Steady talkin, all of my endeavours all depend
    whether i can sever niggas that rated eleven out of ten
    Think about it, takes a week to decipher my two cents
    Fuck a battle, 1 on 1 you know my rifle will wound them
    Enlightened, my true strengths, come free flowing
    My steez glowing, i’ve been knowing, the real omens
    The street spoken, use your mind, or be broken
    Leaves floating, breeze blowin, tree smokin’
    My life is free flowin’ free flowin’ free flowin’
    Freeflowin’[/center:37q2vgl5]



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    3. A Light In The Attic
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    [center:37q2vgl5]A grown child, abused & depraved becomes vile..
    This boy paul' was defiled, & grew up with sadistic styles..
    In his eye's' all women were, god's walking sins..
    Limbs he enjoys ripping apart, chopping skins..
    He's always disecting thighs vivid, he's stalking kins..
    Paul's realistic & wicked, with a shocking grin..
    Riddling these walls with blood & shallow plots..
    Skulls rot, lingering smells from his onslaught..
    Decapated this single victim, without thought..
    Infatuated with customs, watching the blood clot..
    The attic was his sanctum, place he was self taught..
    A classic phantom, his victims taught' distraught..
    On to these actions, that had no place in the world..
    Connecting fractions, from reports of these missing girls..
    This detective a veteran, has become clued into focus..
    A respected citizen, who completely blew it from proportion..
    As he left the police station, phazed or puzzled no more..
    He reached his location, blazed through the front door..
    The detective stumbled upon, the light coming from the attic..
    Climbed the stairs & said, "son please stop the madness"..
    Paul paused & said "we" i can't get past this, It's not just a habbit..
    His dad replied "this is savage", were addicted "we" need to have it..
    The stakes are massive, everyone is able to change what happens..
    Make moves passive, this is unstable' it's a strange way of passion..
    It's simply gone to far' my son your scarred, so it ends tonight..
    As they begin to fight, with each other & demons of sins alike..
    Paul threw a deadly left jab, his father simply took a step back..
    Followed with a right paul quoted "detect that, i'll give ya neck a slash"..
    As he reached for his sharp blade, his father kicked it into a dark place..
    Keeping the women from harms way, grabbed paul & punched his smug face..
    His son reacted with a uppercut, into his fathers gut..
    Screaming "dad i knew you were never gonna be enough"..
    Holding his dad's gun, still screaming "this is mad fun"..
    Why the hell' would you try to help, we love none..
    But where his father landed with open hands, by the blade in the dark..
    His father said " befor i see you become a hopeless man", i must end the shame in my heart..
    His father threw the knife, paul knowning he's gonna lose his life..
    Paul shot & whispered "im sorry i never grew up right"..
    At that moment the knife hit his chest, while the bullet missed his neck..
    his father saying "im sorry son but i had to lay you to rest"..
    The women escaped the scene, down the street with a hasty scream..
    The detective gave his son's body a faceless glem..
    Grabbed his weapon, but hurt for his son so he began to shout..
    Screaming "this is the last lesson", then put the gun in his mouth..

    ...BANG...[/center:37q2vgl5]




    [center:37q2vgl5]4. Keystyled[/center:37q2vgl5]

    [center:37q2vgl5]I watch all life change; as light waves bright rays,
    on white days from sight fade to slight grey then night shade.
    And darkens the spectrum -- Hearken; the end comes.
    The sky's parting to provide pardons for a red sun;
    which is fading; saying that stars then a dead one.
    Plants whither from climates like winters come violent & left none.
    Animals die which leaves most people to dine with bread crumbs.
    Life seems cold, but is three fold with the silence death's brung.
    I look to the sky -- from the ground and see galaxies,
    Push and collide beyond boundaries of clouds and trees.
    Comets fast advances down to sea; avalanches from mountain peaks.
    Volcanoes fountain debris; into the air and out in the streets.
    Tornado tunnels funnel -- tearing through towns and then cease.
    While tsunami run offs flood blocks which drowns about half of each.
    Amidst the chaos since the days lost; this holy justice begins;
    And the sands of time lift as mans reminded they're only dust in the winds.[/center:37q2vgl5]
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    Re: Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    sup man, I am a professional rapper and these raps suck

    word, I'm out
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    Re: Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    Quote Originally Posted by Crono
    sup man, I am a professional rapper and these raps suck

    word, I'm out
    You're a shitty troll.
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    Re: Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    nah man I'm serious, these are cliche and typical as fuck

    I mean shit,

    if ya are what you eat,
    ya snack on shit rappers
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    Re: Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    Quote Originally Posted by Crono
    nah man I'm serious, these are cliche and typical as fuck

    I mean shit,

    if ya are what you eat,
    ya snack on shit rappers
    Haha, cliche as fuck? I can post the good shit from my rhymebook if you want. And that is WACK as, what the fuck kind of insult is that? I'd MURK you in a battle.
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    Re: Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    naw man, I've got a record deal comin, I'm pro

    I wouldn't want to bomb on an amateur like you, sorry sunshine
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    Re: Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    The only one I liked was #4, the others are pretty much re-hashes of ideas explored by many other artists before you. Anyways, #4 had a good message to it, the descriptive words painted a clear picture in my mind.

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    Re: Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    Quote Originally Posted by Crono
    naw man, I've got a record deal comin, I'm pro

    I wouldn't want to bomb on an amateur like you, sorry sunshine
    LOL with those wack lines? The underground must fucking HATE you fam. Whats your name on the streets, I'm findin out some background info on you. Show me some audio work so I can see how shit you are on beats.
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    Re: Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    Quote Originally Posted by Outpatient
    Quote Originally Posted by Crono
    naw man, I've got a record deal comin, I'm pro

    I wouldn't want to bomb on an amateur like you, sorry sunshine
    LOL with those wack lines? The underground must fucking HATE you fam. Whats your name on the streets, I'm findin out some background info on you. Show me some audio work so I can see how shit you are on beats.
    I'm pretty big in my city man. Obviously, I'm a pro. Probably taught your crew a few things ya'know how it is.
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    Re: Redemption for Sinners [Outpatient's Lyrics Thread]

    Quote Originally Posted by Crono
    Quote Originally Posted by Outpatient
    Quote Originally Posted by Crono
    naw man, I've got a record deal comin, I'm pro

    I wouldn't want to bomb on an amateur like you, sorry sunshine
    LOL with those wack lines? The underground must fucking HATE you fam. Whats your name on the streets, I'm findin out some background info on you. Show me some audio work so I can see how shit you are on beats.
    I'm pretty big in my city man. Obviously, I'm a pro. Probably taught your crew a few things ya'know how it is.
    Pretty big in your city? YOUR WACK AS FUCK. You have no flow it's fucking hilarious hahaha wow your wack as fuck. Stick to the internet and never release that shit on audio it's fucking TERRIBLE. These are rhymes I found laying around, you actually spent your time on that shit for class? Hahahahahhahah, wow. Fuck you man, set up a battle. Let me show you how we spit here in Britland. If your lucky, I might feel compelled to drop a short diss track, considering I already got one lined up against OCD waiting in the studio hahaha
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