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Thread: a boy who was pushed~comment plz

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    8/10 would read again. courtesy?

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    Guys, what can you expect? He isn't a writer, he's a youtuber not a very popular one but a youtuber.
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    not bad at all, i didnt mind the read. 7/10, considering spelling n all... i just posted something i wrote, figured someone might enjoy it, need opinions on it, need to know if i should continue, ZERO - A Graffiti Artists Story -- Violence and Language.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ado dragon View Post
    This thread is radiating retardation.
    XD LOL >> HAHAHAH .... Radiating Retardaiton ? LOL

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    This place is different.
    My thread

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheRavenHouse View Post
    Stark, where the fuck have you been? This forum is dying, we need you.
    I've been lurking just not posting. Haven't had dat DD feel for a while.

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    Thanks to all

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    15 but 10 when this was made I just copied and pasted

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    That makes sense then.

    I fixed a few mistakes you made in the story btw C:

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...Ggi2CYxrM/edit
    Last edited by Gary; 04 Jan 2014 at 02:00 PM.


 
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