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  1. #1
    Enthusiast Red Shore's Avatar
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    What do you think?

    http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/257885

    First track for my album.
    It's not like, a Crash hot uber mad techno or anything.
    Just a start track for the rest of my album.

    It's still unfinished and stuff.
    Iron the creases.
    But that is basically how it sounds.
    Different effects though.
    Maybe altered drum beats depending on what you think sounds good. I personally don't like the very end bit how the drums are on their own for about half a bar.

    But, what do you think of it?


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    Re: What do you think?

    I liked it . But i think there should be some thing in the middle like a build up , some thing different from the rest of the song , its good right now but plane .
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    Re: What do you think?

    It's ok. I didn't really like the drum rhythms but the background music was nice.
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    Re: What do you think?

    I'm still trying to find a decent distorted guitar setting for Fruity loops Before I continue from where I've left off
    I bet you're still trying lol. Bloody impossible man. No such thing as an authentic synthesized guitar. There's no substitute for real tones really.

    As for the song it was horrible. FL defaults will get you nowhere.
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    Re: What do you think?

    Do you have EZ Drummer? I just hooked my FL8 up with the Drumkit from Hell, which is a compilation of the best Swedish Metal drum samples.. I could play the guitar parts for you if you needed too, cause it could turn out good, who knows :P.
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    Re: What do you think?

    I didn't like it. Too boring, same shit over and over again. FL isn't really for realistic things, so the guitar sound? Not going to happen well.

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    Re: What do you think?

    I can't listen to that, the sound keeps switching from one headphone to the other. Makes it really annoying.

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    Re: What do you think?

    To be honest, it really sounds like a collection of loops thrown together very quickly. I would normally be more forgiving if the loops had been altered a bit, or put together more smoothly, but the different drums just don't mesh, completely off-rhythm at some point, and the actual melody is very repetetive, and most of the parts don't compliment each other.
    To improve, try and create a better-structured drum beat, and make it simple, seeing as it's your first song, and try getting each section of the melody to be the same key at least, and that would be a start.

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    Re: What do you think?

    i quite liked the rhythm and the concept, the drums were a little messy but i liked the synth lead. but overall i felt it lacked substance and drive, a bit boring. the sound was thick, but it was all background music, you needed some higher pitch synth in there to give it some definition.
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