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    My Bands Song!

    Hey i havent been here in a while, But ive been busy with school and like important exams and such
    but aswell as that, ive been involved with my band, and just recently we recorded our first song, and we have the demo version back,

    So Presenting To You, The Demo Version Of Our First Song:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jZWDhsRUMO8

    Comments Please?
    Whether you like or not, but yeah dont flame
    and if you like it, be sure to show your friends
    Although keep in mind, its our first song, and its a demo version
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    Re: My Bands Song!

    Considering it's a demo and it's still rough around the edges, not bad. Work on the singing and hit some good high notes. Guitar neat and drums were pretty nice. Also, work alot with mixing and levels. some stuff is louder and more synthesized than others. But overall you guys did a good job. Btw, what genre is this supposed to be? I'm hinting some punk-rock and some alternate metal.

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    Re: My Bands Song!

    thanks for that
    yeah it we were going for that sort of genre,
    were Influence by different things
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    Singer - BFMV, Funeral For A Friend... and more, but you get the just
    Me - Everything... well basically
    Drummer - DnB, Metal, yeah...
    Bassist - A7X, yeah stuff liek that, and some dance stuff
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    Re: My Bands Song!

    Guitar was the best part about it. I liked everything, except for the singing. Not to be offensive, but I'd definitely recommend working out harmonies with him if he's going to keep singing. Otherwise, go with straight screaming, that was pretty well done.

    Very good for the most part, the first few seconds reminded me of a Destroyer 666 riff.
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    Re: My Bands Song!

    thanks man, yeah im not a big fan of his singing either, but other people are, so i just go along with it
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    Re: My Bands Song!

    I'd get a new vocalist to do the singing and harmony, and let the dude singing now be the screamer guy, cause his singing sucks. The guitar was the best part in my opinion. I didn't like it too much, mostly because the vocals were really, really whiny.
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    Re: My Bands Song!

    Yeah, the singing wasn't too great. At all. The guitar was pretty good, though. I kind of like the screaming. Not so much though. And it cracked around 2:02 to 2:05. Just thought I'd point that out. Try to avoid it, etc.
    What part of the band are you in?

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    Re: My Bands Song!

    im the guitarist, im glad you guys like the guitar, well yeah im the guitarist, Obvious

    but yeah i like to compose, which is why im glad
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