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    World Beat & Sick Beats (Extended)

    World Beat:
    http://www.truploader.com/view/801270

    Sick Beats (Extended):
    http://www.truploader.com/view/164449

    Sick Beats:
    http://www.truploader.com/view/147444

    I know, it's all GarageBand loops, sue me.
    But I think it's pretty awesome.

    PS: Please use good headphones or speakers with plenty of bass.

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    Re: A Song I Made

    Hey, the media forum is there for a reason.
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    Re: A Song I Made

    Pretty good other than the SUPER repetitiveness.

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    Re: A Song I Made

    Thanks, I'll work on it.

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    Re: A Song I Made

    Other than being super repetitive, the bass is monotone, and the song itself is linear.

    There are no build ups, no drops, no definite chorus, verse, break, bridge, outro.

    I can't believe I paused my itunes to listen to this.

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    Re: World Beat & Sick Beats (Extended)

    World Beat:
    http://www.truploader.com/view/801270

    Sick Beats (Extended):
    http://www.truploader.com/view/164449

    I improved Sick Beats, added a melody and stuff. And made a new one, World Beats.
    Hope you like.

    Also, please listen to the songs all the way through, it takes time for them to build up.

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    Re: World Beat & Sick Beats (Extended)

    You don't take any advice do you?

    You've done exactly the same with World Beat that you did with "Sick" beats. There's no build up. No chorus.

    And the song totally changes at around the 3-3:40 mark.

    Pick a song and stick with that. And try not to make them so damn boring.

    "Sick" beats extended is pretty much still as boring as it was before. Except this time you've added different sounding leads over each part of the song. Which just sounds stupid.


 

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